Before reading this, a few notes! I don't understand a word of Japanese myself, these were translated for me by a friend, from Japanese to Italian. Since I do want to share fandom things and top people into apping Coulomb at Thusia for me, the translations on here are from ITALIAN TO ENGLISH. While this is obviously not going to be a babelfish-like monster and I'm keeping things as close to the original meaning as possible, the fact this is a translation of a translation still means not everything is 100% accurate. I'm also way more used to translate from English to Italian rather than the other way around so a few things might end up sounding awkward. Better than the nothing that was out there so far though.

Another important thing! My friend's pretty damn good, but she couldn't find a written script for these cds, so she had to go by ear. Because a lot of the dialogs use dialects and slang (this especially for Coulomb), she didn't translate everything word per word but gave summaries for the parts she couldn't translate properly. Again, STILL BETTER THAN NOTHING.

You can find links to download the two CDs here.

Meteor Plan, part one )
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Years ago i put up the translation for the First Part of Meteor Plan, but then got too lazy to actually put up the second part. The wonderful [tumblr.com profile] nekovale came to the rescue and translated part 2 from Italian to English, so with her permission I'm putting these ups for people who might be interested. Enjoy!

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CONCRIT

Jan. 29th, 2016 09:45 pm
If you have any comment on my portrayal of Ling or anything whatsoever, feel free to leave it here! Any help will be super appreciated, thank you!

Oops, forgot to mention. English is not my first language. It gets severely worse the later it is, so I apologize in advance if some of the things I write make no sense. That being said, I welcome English corrections as well as regular concrit here so go wild!

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Stats

Apr. 21st, 2014 05:40 am
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Name: LYNX // LING YAO
Age: actual age is 15, but he looks older. Canonly people are surprised when they hear his age/don't believe him, and he looks more around 19ish.
Team: Carnelian

Height/Build: Somewhere around 170cms / he isn't buff but he has a muscular built / well defined muscles
Hair Color/Eye Color: Black / Dark blue
Notable Traits: Eyes are almost always kept closed/squinted, generally he has them open when SHIT GETS SERIOUS.

Other: No special pings given, normal human here!
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Skill 06

May. 2nd, 2013 08:32 am
Gained on: Day 244, Hansel and Gretel's game
Form: Skills come in the form of a slice of bread. It's a little stale, but edible

Skill:
Handling hand grenades, flash bombs and smoke bombs.

What it is: Ling has now knowledge of explosives I hope you feel safe.

Memory 26

Apr. 24th, 2013 01:39 pm
Gained on: Day 240, Mother and Baker's game
Form: Memories come in the form of tea cookies
Shareable: 0/4 (not taken)

Memory:
Neutral-Significant - Confrontation with Coulomb, defeated (Drama CD)

What I'm rejecting is... you, Coulomb. )

Memory 25

Dec. 25th, 2012 05:27 pm
Gained on: Day 204, Masked Lady's game
Form: Memories are in the form of little teddybear head-shaped wagashi in your team's color. Awwww. I'm sure their beady little candy eyes won't stare at you judgingly all.
Shareable: ???/??? (not taken)

Memory:
Trivial-Neutral - Talking with Coulomb after eating his cooking. (Drama CD)

You're someone who's better off dead. )
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Memory 19

Gained on: Day 187, Nimue's game
Form: Memories come in the form of a small vial of water, with a ribbon in your team's color wrapped around it. Drink to receive, not shareable.
Shareable: 0/1 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Neutral - Meeting Ed and Al, revealing he wants to gain immortality

I want it really badly. Do you know about it? )

Memory 20

Gained on: Day 191, Twins' game
Form: Come in the form of VERY SHINY GOLD STAR STICKERS, six to a sheet.
Shareable: 5/6 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Positive - Offering the Philosopher's stone to Ed

Ed! We still have payment! )

Memory 21

Gained on: Day 194, Pandora's game
Form: Come in the form of small clay jars, no bigger than your fist. Drop them on the ground and shatter them to view your memory
Shareable: 0/1 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Neutral - Ed, Al and Ling vs Gluttony and Envy, being swallowed by Gluttony

Thank you. You... are nothing compared to him! )

Memory 22

Gained on: Day 196, Nimue's game
Form: Form is a small vial of green liquid, with a ribbon tied around it in your team's color.
Shareable: 0/1 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Neutral - Looking for a safe place, meeting Ed again

He started freaking out so I took the chance to take control of my body again. )

Memory 23

Gained on: Day 199, Gingerbread Witch's game
Form: They come in the form of five chocolate chip cookies.
Shareable: 4/5 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Positive - Sharing body with Greed: switching places to fight Gluttony, RAN FAN COMES BACK

I've been eager to see you again, Ran Fan! )

Memory 24

Gained on: Day 202, Firebird's game
Form: Memories are tiny golden cages with doors that pop open and closed!
Shareable: 7/7 [not taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Goodbye Bromunculus :(

Don't give up on me, Greed! )

MEMORY 18

Oct. 15th, 2012 01:35 pm
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Gained on: Day 185, Gingerbread Witch's game
Form: Memories come in the form of lollipops of your team color. How many licks does it take to get to the center? One...two...Three!
Shareable: 1/3 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Sharing body with Greed: Crying over Fu's death, lending help to Briggs' soldiers.

Why can't I save a single vassal despite achieving immortality...? )
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MEMORIES



Memory 13

Gained on: Day 170, Mother Goose's game
Form: Memories come in the form of a small whistle shaped like blackbirds that have been baked into your team's pie.
Shareable: 3/4 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Neutral - Funtimes with Ed in Gluttony's stomach

You keep taking care of me so the situation keeps getting worse. )

Memory 14

Gained on: Day 177, Dream's game
Form: Perfectly sculpted miniature sugar roses in your team colors- the detail is excruciating and they look real
Shareable: 0/1 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Positive - Breaking out of jail and rescuing Maria Ross

I'll help you out if you let me out. )

Memory 15

Gained on: Day 179, Mr. Right's game
Form: A silver charm bracelet with charms in the shape of microphones, music notes, and tiny ballerinas.
Shareable: 4/6 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Negative - Sharing body with Greed: Greed and King Bradley's talk on the rooftop "don't go looking down on humans >|"

Shut up. Don't make light of humans. )

Memory 16

Gained on: Day 181, Mother's Game
Form: Come in the form of a scrap of burlap in your team's color.
Shareable: [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Positive - Sharing body with Greed: writing a message for Ran Fan (implied)

I've gotten the Philosopher's Stone )

Memory 17

Gained on: Day 183, Peter Pan's game
Form: Memories come in the form of betting tokens identical to the one used in the game
Shareable: 0/2 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-positive - Sharing body with Greed: talk about filling Greed's emptiness, Ed accepts to become Greed's underling

I'll become the new Emperor of Xing and we'll fill in that emptiness )

SKILLS



Skill 04

Gained on: Day 170, Hatter and Dormouse's game
Form: A sugar cube

Skill:
XINGESE!!

What it is: Ling remembers how to talk, read and write in his native language! It's not a super useful skill, but it's one that has a certain amount of impact for Ling as it's a connection to Xing. Also Xingese is basically faux-chinese and while I figure there are some differences, it's probably recognizable enough that people who know anything of the language would be able to tell.

Skill 05

Gained on: Day 183, Hatter and Dormouse's game
Form: Skills come in the form of a tea biscuit

Skill:
NINJA PRINCE SKILLS (speed, agility, etc)

What it is: This is basically the last skill Ling needed to be able to properly fight again! With this, he finally regains his normal speed, agility, reflexes and strength back. Meaning he can now pull stuff like this, this and this. So yeah, pretty deadly (if he wants to be) for a human's standard.

MEMORY 12

Aug. 13th, 2012 06:32 pm
Gained on: Day 168, Seawitch and Hook's game
Form: In the form of a small jar. You must open and sniff it to take you memory. Hope you love the smell of rotting fish
Shareable: 3/4 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Finding out about Coulomb's plans, sentencing him to death. (Drama CD / implied)

sentencing people to death at 10, winning life by Ling Yao )
[ and then we were stuck in a cell and had to come up with terrible decisions AND IT SUCKED.

Taking a look around the place for a few seconds just after landing, he stops on his track the moment he notices the person with him. ]

—Greed?

MEMORY 11

Aug. 5th, 2012 12:02 pm
Gained on: Day 166, Queen's game
Form: memories come in the form of a heart-shaped raspberry jam tart! there's a red velvet bag of four tarts, tied with a red ribbon. eat one to get your memory
Shareable: 4/4 [not taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Meeting Coulomb again (Drama CD)

Why? Why are you here in Amestris? No— why are you alive?! Coulomb...! )
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Memory 09

Gained on: Day 159, Odile's game
Form: Memories come in the form of familiar-looking blood rubies
Shareable: 5/5 [not taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Talking with Ed while Ran Fan is getting surgery

I'm too naive. Ran Fan understands much more than I )


Memory 10

Gained on: Day 164, Nimue's game (swapped)
Form: Memory form is a small note, written in Nimue's handwriting
Shareable: 4/5 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Neutral - Heading to Central, IT'S DANGEROUS TO TRAVEL ALONE AS A YOUNG TEEN.

15 years old. )

MEMORY 08

Jul. 13th, 2012 09:27 pm
Gained on: Day 157, Three's game
Form: memories come in the form of drop spindles in your team color. Just twist it in your hands to see your memory.
Shareable: 08/10 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Positive - Accepting Greed

I want power. To obtain, to protect, to retain. I need absolute power...! I knew the risks from the beginning! Come, Greed, I'll accept you! )

MEMORY 07

Jul. 8th, 2012 05:02 pm
Gained on: Day 156, Mr Right's game
Form: Memories come in the form of: a crown of laurels. Wear it to view the memory
Shareable: 2/3 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Running away with Ran Fan, she cuts her arm off.

So what? Don't battle anymore )
Form: Skills come in the form of two pieces of interlocking but jagged wood. Unite the pieces to form a whole and receive your skill.

What it is:
What it says on the title!! Ling has been training since he got to Aather, but now that he has the skill proper his abilities at hand to hand combat are going to raise quite a lot. Still not as good as he used to be since he lacks the agility/speed/etc skills, but he's back to being a pretty damn competent fighter.

He will now combine martial arts and sword fighting when in battle \:D/ ...whenever he gets a sword that is.

MEMORY 06

Jun. 25th, 2012 12:39 pm
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Gained on: Day 151, Dream's game
Form: memories come in the form of little spun sugar birds in your team color.
Shareable: 0/1 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Positive - Telling Coulomb he wants to become powerful to protect the Yao clan and become Emperor (Drama CD)

insert a witty cut text here )

MEMORY 05

Jun. 13th, 2012 12:33 pm
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Gained on: Day 149, Mother's game
Form: Come in the form of a Word Sorrel flower. The petals are edible! Eat one for your memory.
Shareable: 4/5 [taken]

Memory:
Trivial-Negative - Random assassination attempts by heirs of the other clans (headcanon)

Xing's royal family...!! )

Memory 04

May. 26th, 2012 01:40 pm
Gained on: Day 144, Automaton's game
Form: Each memory comes in the form of a metallic gear, which can be placed on one's finger and spun.
Shareable: 0/4 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Neutral - Father deciding to inject the Philosopher's stone in him

Who do you think I am? I'm the man who will become Xing's next emperor... Ling Yao! )

Memory 03

May. 23rd, 2012 09:48 am
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Gained on: Day 143, Green Knight's game
Form: Memories come in the form of a ribbon in your team colors. Tie it around your arm to view the memory.
Shareable: 4/5 [taken]

Memory:
Significant-Negative - Fighting Gluttony and King Bradley

A king should be there for his people. Without his people, there is no king. )

Memory 02

May. 20th, 2012 06:12 am
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Gained on: Day 143, Peter Pan's game
Form: Memories come in the form of a golden stick! Snap it in half to earn back your memory
Shareable: no (taken)

Memory:
Significant-Neutral - Discussion with Al and Winry about his relationship with his father, Xing, and his objective

There are what, more than 20 sons of the Emperor? )
Form: a bite of meat of unknown origin

What it is:
What it says on the title, pretty much. Ling now remembers swordsmanship! I am too sleepy to go into it more than that but yeah that's it.